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love, a poet I ain't, round 2 by ~pompey:iconpompey:



Saint Valentine has given us today,
So for hearts, sugar and flesh, we pay,
While life and love both drain away.

Blind fools draw bows, take aim,
Golden arrows fly on course to maim,
A heart like theirs, too much the same.

And I, the fool, now and forever hence,
Upon your sweet heart make my offense,
Even if I, to you, make little sense.

For your eyes, each a full and tranquil moon,
Gleaming, beaming, streaming an invisible tune,
Are so lovely they make the heavens swoon.

And your smile, so perfectly warm and bright,
Unearthly, glowing with transcendent light,
Is so charming it can't but dispel my plight.

Still nothing compares to what inside I find,
A soul so full of joy, so pleasant and kind,
That every nuance is pressed upon my mind.
©2007-2009 ~pompey
:iconpompey:

Author's Comments

Yes, the same one, only reworked. I can't stand to read the old one again, so I can't tell if its really different or better or whatever. But oh well.

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:iconi-am-lying:
It's beautiful! Theres just something about this that makes it very, very pretty.
Maybe the vocabulary and the wording, but...Ahhhhh I love it. :]

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and i will sing you lullabies_xx
:iconpompey:
Aww, thank you so much! I worked very hard on it.
:iconnarien:
Honestly more beautiful (:
And it seems effortlessly written which makes it more beautiful...like in the way the words flow i mean ;)

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Narien.
:iconpompey:
Thanks you, that's really what I worked on in this version. (:

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